Red Ashes

I love Spirit! I watched it again only a few days ago and still loved it! :D I cried too, the end's bittersweeet... The music is my favourite part, gives ...

Hello Fanpire (do I call you that?) Here goes. :D Well, I have my own way of critiquing (you have no idea how many times I've said this) so bear ...

Well, you've had all the comments on technicalities and such of poetry, so I, as a non poet, will comment on the feel and the concept of this piece without ...

Thank you both so much for commenting. :D I have wanted to try out my hand at poetry and this is my first, "serious" go. I know there is tons ...

Okay, so, I'll give this a go and be the first one, Yay! :D But, um, I just have to say that I have a unique critiquing style. My corrections ...

Well, yeah, I know I can't get a job now ! But it's something to hope for, right? :D Thanks for your trust in me! (Does that even make sense? ...

Thank you so much! You guys are so nice! :D Wow, we can get jobs?! That's so cool! So, that can be an objective for me! Get a job! Alrighty-then... ...

Hi, um, I'm not very good at poetry. Not really a poet, me. But sure, I'll give it a go. I need help with, well, everything. Just have a look, ...

Thanks, fellow Brit! Who couldn't like Marmite? Hahaha! Almost everyone! Sorry, randomness... Thank you a lot for your warm welcome, :D ~Ash~

Wow, thanks, I didn't think a reply would come so soon! Makes me feel *special* :D Thank you very much for the useful tips, they will definitely help me along. ...

You be my first critique!!! Well, here goes... Chapter One: I Punch, You cry I like the title! :D I tightened my abdomen, gritted my teeth and stood my ground. ...

Hi, I'm Red Ashes! You can call me Ashes, or Red, or Ash... Hmm, I like the sound of Ash... I'm new to this place - well, obviously - and ...